yippie comments section fixed.... now then.... story time again... part 2... the man walked from the bar and decided that the strange event was an occurance that he had because he drank too much passed out... then had the strangest dream ever... since he had been greeted by the barman afterwards, that was the best explanation there could be.... so he starts to walk home but is overcome again by the feeling that someone is following him.. he looks back every five or six steps but each time no one is there... finally he gets home... paranoid and exausted from the mental trauma at the bar.... locks all the doors and falls asleep on the couch.... the next thing that happens is a dinging sound like the sounds of a traincrossing.... shaken awake the man decides he is going crazy and goes to get a drink from the fridge... opening the fridge he hears the noise again.... he looks around but nothing can be found.. and the noise goes away... he gets his drink and goes back to the couch... turns on the tv and becomes tired again.... finishing off the drink the man decides to go to bed... he climbs the stairs and goes up to his room.... opening the door he hears the noise again... ding ding ding.... inside the door he finds to his horror the bed is all messed up ... blood is everywhere... in the bed is a body of a woman... and in her chest a knife... the man reaches for his pocket for the knife he always carries... it's not there... the man goes closer to the bed... but he's even more shaken .. the womans's eyes are open.... he starts wondering what he should do ... hide the body? or call the police.... he figures he doesn't want to go to jail but he
knows he couldn't get the body out of the house without someone finding him... but he must try... the man picks up a towel and wraps it around the knife... takes the knife from the womans chest and puts it aside to clean it later.... he rolls up the sheets around the body of the woman... picks her up and puts her over his shoulder... goes out to the hall and down the stairs... he puts her down by the door and goes out to the car... gets in the car and moves it closer to the door... looking around the neighbours houses makes sure the coast is clear... goes into the house and obtains the body... taking her he places her in the trunk of the car .. carefull not to get anything on the carpet... he moves the car back into the driveway and goes back into the house to clean the rest of the mess... going back upstairs he hears the dinging noise again... pausing to look around he decides to ignore the noise... back in the room he gets rid of the evidence and cleans his knife best he can and places it back in his pocket where he always keeps it.... having the remaining cloths in a garbage bag the man leaves the room and proceeds down the stairs... again the man hears the dinging noises but louder this time... he trips and tumbles down the stairs... hitting his head hard on the floor below knocking him out.. he's twisted in a strange position... he's dead
the man wakes up... he's still on the couch where he passed out coming home from the bar... shaken from what he regards as another crazy dream he gets a drink from the fridge.... then remembering more of the dream he freaks out and runs up the stairs to his room... only to discover there is no mess in the room... nothing is out of the ordinary... except the linens that are normally on the bed are missing.. the man checks the closet... nothing out of the ordinary there either... then he checks his pocket... the knife that he always carries... is there... he shakenly pulls it out of his pocket skared to look at it.. (in case there is blood on it) but there is nothing on it... he puts the knife back and remembers the body in the trunk... he runs from the room down the stairs and out the door... to the car.... he looks around at his neighbours houses and still all clear opens his trunk... the missing linens are rolled up in a ball in the trunk.... shocked the man pokes at them... but they are soft... he pokes harder.. still soft.. the man unravells the linens and discovers that there is no body and no blood... but why are they in the trunk? the man closes the trunk and goes back in the house... he is becoming totally freaked out and doesn't know what is happening to him... he looks at the time and coming back to reality remembers he must be getting to work.... passing it all off as drunken dreams he goes up and gets washed and dressed ready for work... he gets in his car and goes off to work.. still tired from the nights restless events he yawns a occasionally on his way to work.... but then the worst happens... the man hears the same dinging noise as the night before and becomes afraid of what it might mean... but he realizes it's just a train crossing ahead of him... he slows down and comes to a stop right in front of the gate... the noise is louder now.... he calmly waits for the train to go by so he can continue on his journey to work.... a few seconds pass but still no train... he looks down the tracks both ways... no sign of the train... odd he thinks to himself... where could the train be... the noise seems to increase but still no sign of the train.... then the noise stops... the railing rises and the man hears screeching sounds... then he starts to shake in convulsions.... a large truck slams him from behind and the car moves forward into the tracks.... the car comes to a stop on the other side of the tracks and the man comes to clarity but still shaken the man climbs from his car and looks behind him... the truck is stopped on the tracks ... the man decides he should try to help whoever is in the truck... he goes to the window and finds a woman is unconsious at the wheel... he opens the door and checks her.. shaking her gently he figures he better not move her.. in case of neck injury... but he hears the noise that has been haunting him from the night previous... the dinging sound... he looks around but no train.... he remembers the woman at the wheel and thinks it would be best if he gets her out of the truck and away from the tracks... he moves her head to see if she will regain consiousness.. but he goes into shock himself... the woman has a knife in her chest... and a tattoo on her forehead... it's the woman from his supposed dreams... he can't move.. he's horrified... but that's not the worst part... the truck gets rocked to pieces and the man is squished as the train comes from the other side of the truck.. he forgot to check the other way.... ding ding ding... the noise from the crossing sign as the man gets dragged and squished down the tracks....
the man hears a horn honking.... he's shaken back to reality... the train has gone by and the guard rail has been lifted the dinging sound stops.. the horn goes again... he looks behind him the car behind him is honking for him to go.... the man pulls off to the side of the road he can no longer drive anywhere.. he's upset and knows he must seek help... but he is now going to be late for work....
to be continued.....
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